This one showed up on random reads.
I like everything about it.
1. The unexpectedness -- when one reads the title, and then comes to the first line, it's a surprise.
2. The picture you paint in a few short words.
3. The irony of the 'scars' being on the furniture.
4. The layout, including the emoticons you've chosen.
5. The explanation of the poetic form.
I did have to look at the genres to clarify that it was about a pet who had passed on. As it stands, it needs to be inferred from the title. Maybe a hint in the brief description or the poem itself ... ?
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