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Hello Sherasi ,

I am reviewing this story/poem for the following contest:
"Rising to the Challenge! - CLOSED"   by Lilli 🧿 ☕

Prompt: Start your poem with this phrase: "It begins..."
Line Count: minimum 12 lines

This review has no bearing on the outcome of the contest. Reviewing the entries gives me the opportunity to take a closer look.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:

This is a lovely poem and I like how you brought the senses into this. The mention of how the breezes have a taste rather than a smell I have never experienced. But I am familiar with the way the air smells differently after a rain, dry spell, etc.

I loved the mention of the daffodil peeking out from the snow! Reminded me of that beautiful sight and the promise of spring.

I'm sure this poem will resonate with anyone who has experienced the transition from winter to spring will find this relatable, as I did.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:

I did not see any errors with spelling or grammar. As for punctuation, I don't pay much mind to that in poetry either, so it all looks good to me.

Closing Comments:

Thank you for your entry! Keep writing!




Thank you for sharing your work.


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .