Prompt: Start your poem with this phrase: "It begins..."
Line Count: minimum 12 lines
This review has no bearing on the outcome of the contest. Reviewing the entries gives me the opportunity to take a closer look.
Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
It's been a real treat reading the entries and discovering where each poet takes the prompt. Your poem took me on a bit of a journey and the word selections created images in my mind that helped carry me through the journey.
It's too difficult for me to say which quatrain I like the most because has lines that I absolutely love.
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
I did not see any errors.
Closing Comments:
Thank you for your entry! This was a real treat and a joy to read.
Keep writing!
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