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Review #4645685
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Dragon Daughter  [18+]
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by Tileira
         Review for entry/chapter: "Awakening (a poem)
Review of Dragon Daughter  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello Tileira ,

I am reviewing this story/poem for the following contest:
"Rising to the Challenge! - CLOSED"   by Lilli 🧿 ☕

Prompt: Start your poem with this phrase: "It begins..."
Line Count: minimum 12 lines

*Type* This review has no bearing on the outcome of the contest. Reviewing the entries gives me the opportunity to take a closer look.

*Flowerb* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:

It's been a real treat reading the entries and discovering where each poet takes the prompt. Your poem took me on a bit of a journey and the word selections created images in my mind that helped carry me through the journey.

It's too difficult for me to say which quatrain I like the most because has lines that I absolutely love.

*Flowerb* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:

I did not see any errors.

*Flowerb* Closing Comments:

Thank you for your entry! This was a real treat and a joy to read.
Keep writing!



Thank you for sharing your work.


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