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Hello Sumojo ,

I am reviewing this story/poem for the following contest:
"Rising to the Challenge! - CLOSED"   by Lilli 🧿 ☕

Prompt: Start your poem with this phrase: "It begins..."
Line Count: minimum 12 lines

This review has no bearing on the outcome of the contest. Reviewing the entries gives me the opportunity to take a closer look.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:

Wow, great poem and I especially love the first quatrain! But then the poem takes a sad turn with the words slipping away. No doubt they will return to you - I'm sure of it!

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:

No spelling or grammar errors were noted.

Closing Comments:

As much as I love this poem it pains me that I can't consider it for prizes since you are a Preferred Author and the contest is limited to Registered Authors.

Keep writing and sharing.




Thank you for sharing your work.


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .