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 It Begins Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about writing
by Sumojo Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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02.04.22

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Review: "It BeginsOpen in new Window. written by Sumojo Author IconMail Icon


Poems speak to different readers in different ways. I’d like to share my impressions of this poem with you.


First: Before I began reading, I noticed the pleasing presentation of the poem – 5 stanzas with 4 lines in each. Font size was nice and readable.

As I Read:

*Bullet* For me, this poem is like a mini-roller coaster. In the first 3 stanzas, the narrator is very upbeat and hopeful, celebrating a great writing idea. A brilliant plot, it’s going to be great. / A novel, a film, a Broadway Show? However, stanza 4 begins the narrator’s descent into memory loss and doubt. Oh, no, the words are fading quickly. The final stanza ends on a ray of hope that inspiration will rise again. That last line is great and personal.

Finally: I really like your poem. The subject matter will definitely speak to writers. There Is humor, entertainment, and skillful use of poetic devices included. Thank you for sharing!



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