I loved the mythological references in your well written couplet verses. I was moved by the first first which sets the tone, mood and aura of the piece. I wanted to read on.
The poem is complete as it speaks of death and the reason the poet dwells on it, using the mythical icons. The call for death to come is potent, a way out of suffering. The poem shows well the fading light and shadows of the dark coming. I like that you end with Charon!
The form of rhyming couplets fits the theme and emotional content effectively. The rhyme is patterned with a couple of off rhymes that work well. I like the word "endows". The rhythm is not even as some lines have more beats than others. Yet, I was not thrown out of the flow.
I really enjoyed entering into your creative vision and evocative imagery. Thanks for sharing your gift.
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Greetings Sherasi. I am happy to celebrate You with a review on behalf of "Poetry Review Garden [on hiatus]" 
I loved the mythological references in your well written couplet verses. I was moved by the first first which sets the tone, mood and aura of the piece. 
I wanted to read on.
The poem is complete as it speaks of death and the reason the poet dwells on it, using the mythical icons. The call for death to come is potent, a way out of suffering. The poem shows well the fading light and shadows of the dark coming. I like that you end with Charon! 
The form of rhyming couplets fits the theme and emotional content effectively. The rhyme is patterned with a couple of off rhymes that work well. I like the word "endows". The rhythm is not even as some lines have more beats than others. Yet, I was not thrown out of the flow. 
I really enjoyed entering into your creative vision and evocative imagery. Thanks for sharing your gift. 
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You responded to this review 02/28/2022 @ 10:49am EST