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Hello WriterAngel ,

I spotted your poem in one of the gardens at "Poetry Review Garden [on hiatus]" , and as one of the gardeners, I am here to read and review your lovely offering!

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:

The title of this poem really grabbed my attention and the first two lines kept me riveted to the end.

You did a clever job of wordplay here using analogies to create imagery in the reader's mind.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:

I saw no spelling or grammar errors and have no suggestions to make.

Closing Comments:

This was wonderful and I look forward to reading more of your work.



Thank you for sharing your work.


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .