\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4656072
Review #4656072
Viewing a review of:
Fibonacci Spring Open in new Window. [E]
An ode to springtime
by Words Whirling 'Round Author Icon
Review of Fibonacci Spring  Open in new Window.
Review by eyestar~* Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
*Sun*Greetings lamb. I am happy to celebrate You with a review on behalf of "Poetry Review Garden [on hiatus]" Open in new Window..


*Butterflyo*What a wonderful picture of spring you paint in this unique form. I have heard of Fibonacci and it is cool to apply it to poetry though I have not tried one! *Smile* You make the challenge of it look easy.

*Dragonflyb* I enjoyed reading the poem aloud and the personification of the little buds yearning. Putting yourself in the natural setting gazing to the sun mirrors the flowers effectively and your sense of being a small part of the whole is really appealing. It is interesting to end with this vastness as it reflects the notion of the growing fibonnaci series. *Cool* Even the words are more complex here.

*Flowerr* I counted all the syllables and wow, you got it. The poem flowed with a coherent message and I noted that the "yearning" line seems like a pivot line that applies to the line before and after it! Awesome idea! *Thumbsup*

It was a good idea to have notes on the math term and how the format works! It may be a new one to many people. *Wink*

*Star* Thanks for sharing this bright vision of spring in an original way. I enjoyed wandering into your world.

Write on in your style!
eyestar
In affiliation with "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window.
A gifted sig!
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 04/28/2022 @ 1:10pm EDT
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4656072