Hello Jay O'Toole !

Your writing always brings me joy and I finally had time to do a review today so when I saw your poem in the news feed, I knew that'd be the one I'd want to review!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
You wrote a powerful resurrection-themed poem.

You kept me riveted throughout and made me read straight through to the end.

I suspect you'll win the contest and wish you every blessing.


MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

I love your heart for the Lord and greatly enjoyed your poem. It made me smile and lifted my spirits.

This was a highly spiritual poem and the conclusion was powerful and true.

Your poem was beautifully written, evoked strong emotions in me, and was interesting to read.

Your poem is well written, flows nicely and, I think, is highly relatable to anyone who loves the Lord.

My favorite part is these two lines:
"The day He rose up from the grave
began all days of life for me." Me too!

I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your poem.

The genres you selected are perfect for your poem.


CONCLUSION:
You wrote a beautiful, spiritual poem that I enjoyed reading. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your poetry and heart for the Lord with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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