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Review #4656212
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Gervic's Poetic Explorations Open in new Window. [13+]
A book to house all my Poetic Explorations
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         Review for entry/chapter: "Wintertime's Out, Springtime's InOpen in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Interesting poem attempting to create a new poetic form. I don't have the guts to attempt that. It is a poem that I feel has some of the emotion inhibited by the attempt at a new form. I think perhaps trying something more traditional would have had a better flow and more emotional impact.

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