Hello Dream ~★~ Justly !

Not only was yours the post before mine in I Write, Enter the Second Decade, but your anniversary month coincided with this weekend's WDC SuperPower Reviewers' May Mayhem raid and I liked your poem, so I decided to give you a review. I hope you find this review uplifting and encouraging.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
You wrote a lovely villanelle form poem.

You kept me riveted throughout and made me read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

You are very creative and clever to have written one poem that worked for four different contests! Wow!

This was a lovely poem and the conclusion was sweet.

Your poem was beautifully written, made me feel transported while I read it, and was interesting to read.

Your poem is well written, flows nicely and, I think, will be highly relatable to anyone who appreciates a villanelle poem.

My favorite line is this one: "as crystal light hangs in the air." It just struck me as particularly pretty.

I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your poem.

The nature genre is great for this poem.

In the spirit of helpfulness, I'd recommend selecting two different genres, besides "other" and "contest" as few readers search those genres for things to read and they are less likely to net you a Quill award, should someone nominate this poem for one.

Also, adding a thumbnail picture might net you more readers. And another reason to add a picture is that contest judges, if torn between two pieces for first or second place, might pick the one with a picture because it shows just that little bit more effort.


CONCLUSION:
You wrote a lovely nature poem that I enjoyed reading. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your poetry with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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