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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Sun*Greetings Dream Justly. I am happy to celebrate You with a review on behalf of "Poetry Review Garden [on hiatus]" Open in new Window..


*Shock* What an eerie and unique response to the prompt! *Thumbsup* Using the Pleiades form was a cool idea too and you did an awesome job with all of those "r" words! A great revelation at the end. Brilliant concept.

*Rabbit* Your short poem captured the theme of rebirth vividly presenting a dark vibe. Chosen words like "darkened", "rotten", "ragged" add to the dark image. I liked the old fashioned word "Naught" as it draws attention. The enjambment with the word "yet" works well too.

*Rabbit3* I enjoyed reading the poem aloud. It has an intensity and the warning is clear. Very creepy notion here. I can appreciate the effort and time it took to get this imagery concisely into this form with 6 syllable lines. *Thumbsup*

*Star*Thanks for sharing your darkling gift. *Smile*

Write on in your style!
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