Thank you for referencing the Poetry type. I wonder if this was written for a challenge or contest, Most of the time when I specifically follow forms like this I am writing from a prompt which includes the requirement of a specific form. I like those contests and if this were for one of them I would consider entering it. That said it would help if you referenced the prompt and contest or challenge. If you are worried about cluttering up the poem you could always turn your author's note into a dropnote. They clean things up considerably. If you do reference a contest or challenge make sure you don't just link it but type the name of it also so that if it gets deleted people including yourself would know what it was for.

Now to the meat of the poem. I love the way you effectively compare writing and cooking. THe descriptive words you use made my mouth water and my fingers itch to write this review. I especially liked noun fricassee. That just sounds so cool to me. Fricassee is a fun word and it contributes to the meaning in being a fun word.

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Ultimate Trinket Adventure [Mainland]  (E) Collect treasures, complete tasks, and win the golden Apple.. #2267246 by GERVIC