....Thanks for the happy ending!!! I was getting really concerned as I read about the snake bite. I'll be the first to admit I'm scared of snakes. In fact, I'm scared of sticks that even look like snakes!! A friend lives in an area with rattle snakes and his dog got bit a few years back (survived without issue). Anyway, wonderful story!! I sure couldn't do your job with the animals (putting them down/seeing how others abuse their pets) . . . you're a very brave person with a heart of gold for taking in so many as your own and giving them a good home.

I didn't see anything that needs editing in your story. Spelling and grammar were excellent all through, along with sentence structure and paragraphs. It was easy to read and enjoy without having to stop and stumble over technical issues. Well done!!

As you can tell, I'm not a good reviewer - but I just wanted to let you know that I read your story and appreciated you sharing it. Being a true story certainly makes it much more intense!!

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