Good morning! I thought I would come by for a short little visit and as I did I decided to come into your poem titled: "Writing In The Rains." Which did draw me in and I have to say that you really do have a way with words as you have drawn me in so cleverly with your creative and clever poem.

I really enjoyed your whole poem but I would have to that this line stuck out to me the most:

As the rains pour, my heart and soul dance
Because in the rains comes yet another chance.

There is something about this line that moves me and I love it when something like this poem can make me feel and even better when a line in a poem stands out to me and makes me feel some kind of way!

I do have to say that I also really like the very last line of this poem too:

The memories of romance that enpower the dove. What a great line but I wonder should the word enpower be the word empower? It does not take away from your poem but I was just wondering is all.

Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!





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