Well done. You have stated your reasoning, given examples that are possibly believable to the reader, and brought the story to a conclusion.
***Dr. Rhode sat across from the notable talk show host, Oprah Winfrey. The show began who with the audience applauding as the camera moved from the crowd to the hostess and her guest.
***“My guest today is the author of the New York Times bestselling book, Inventing God,” she said. “Tell us a little about your book’s premise Dr. Rhode.”
***The idea is that God only exist (-s) as we give the notion substance. We create God in our minds. But, what we do in response to that creation defines the nature if of God. In essence, we are Gods to ourselves.”
***“That is fascinating. You hold three Ph.D.’s, one in physics, one in philosophy (comma) and one in phycology. How long did it take you to write the book and the steps you made compiling the information. (question mark)”
***A middle-aged woman in a blue blouse raised her hand and was given the mike. “What is your take on death?” she said asked.
***During the break, Rhode had a talk with Oprah about appearing on a follow up(hyphenated) show to fully explain his take of on theology. After the break (comma) the discussion went on about different kinds of “Gods” one can create, whether it be a violent God, a careless God (comma) and so on. He also spoke about suffering which he addressed in his book.
***Rhode drove home in is his Porcha and parked in front of his house. He was tired and decided to take a nap on his sofa. He fell asleep and had a dream.
***“Is there pain in a normal dream?” said questioned the messenger.
***“Atoms hold things together. It is a scientific fact. There is no proof of a God. And don’t forget the human soul cannot be proven. How then do you know of where it goes after death?”
***“Where do you think? This is heaven.”

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