Good evening! I just thought I would come by for a short little visit and as I did I came across your clever and creative poem that you call "Mount Vesuvius". I really enjoyed your poem from the very beginning to the very end and I like the feel of the poem as well. You really sure do have a way with words as you paint a picture as you spin your web of words for me to really clearly see and also feel. In your third paragraph at the end where it says "all that I could only see in my dreams" may look better if you put that down to finish off that third paragraph, I know it would look better too.

Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!

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