A touch of brilliance? [E] just some thoughts and images leaking from my brain. |
Hello Pumpkin Spice Sox ! Yours was the post before mine for my current "I Write: Enter the Second Decade Edition" entry, so I'm here to do your review. INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW: You wrote an interesting introspective poem about writing. You kept me riveted throughout and made me read straight through to the end. MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK: I liked your use of poetic devices and introspective questions in this poem. Your poem was nicely written, caused me to think as I read it, and was interesting to read. Your poem flows nicely and, I think, is highly relatable to anyone who ponders their writing craft and feels they have a muse. My favorite line is this one: "Lacy images of mind spilled from the imagination." partly because of how it's written and partly because I could relate to it well. I liked how you structured your poem. I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your poem. The genres you selected for your book work well for your poem. CONCLUSION: You wrote a writing-themed poem that I enjoyed reading. Well done! Thank you for sharing your poetry with the writing.com community! May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance! PWheeler *** WDC SuperPower Review *** Poetry Garden Review Mega Review Challenge Review My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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