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just some thoughts and images leaking from my brain.
by Pumpkin Spice Sox Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Pumpkin Spice Sox Author IconMail Icon !

Yours was the post before mine for my current "I Write: Enter the Second Decade Edition" entry, so I'm here to do your review.

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
You wrote an interesting introspective poem about writing.

You kept me riveted throughout and made me read straight through to the end.


MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

I liked your use of poetic devices and introspective questions in this poem.

Your poem was nicely written, caused me to think as I read it, and was interesting to read.

Your poem flows nicely and, I think, is highly relatable to anyone who ponders their writing craft and feels they have a muse.

My favorite line is this one: "Lacy images of mind spilled from the imagination." partly because of how it's written and partly because I could relate to it well.

I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your poem.

The genres you selected for your book work well for your poem.


CONCLUSION:
You wrote a writing-themed poem that I enjoyed reading. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your poetry with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler


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