This is a good story but it seems more science fiction than paranormal or thriller/suspense. Maybe I can see thriller in that there is a ticking clock and plenty of danger. This was a little flat in the character development department the plot progresses adequately but much of the length was taken up in telling the importance of what they were searching for and the characteristics of passing through a black hole. there are a few typos in it. It is clear that this was written with speed and no lack of creative motivation. Congratulations on finishing the