I love a poem dealing with Perseverance. I like this one because it emphasizes how much the subject of the poem is struggling. The reader is given vivid description of how much the subject of the poem is pulled down in the beginning of this poem. The description of words piercing strength of will like is a powerful image that stands out in the mind of the reader. I think a lot of people can relate to the feeling of a weight pulling at the soul. Reading through the first half of this allows the reader to appreciate how the subject perseveres in the latter half. It makes this poem hopeful and inspirational to read through.

This was reviewed for: "Ultimate Trinket Adventure [Mainland]" 

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