Your words show invisibility in your poem, but your poem shines brightly and you the writer are not invisible. I can picture you writing and enjoying the word journey. Your words work well together creating somber yet I feel hopeful feelings. It seems as if these words of yours were seeking visibility and hope for a bright future. I sniffed the perfume and in my mind, it seemed to have a spring scent of renewal. I guess my reactions to your poem are positive because I prefer to see the bright side of things.

I don't know of any way I would change your poem to make it better. If you decided to add to it, I suggest delving more into feelings, and if possible show the bright side of things.

I really like the imagery you show through your words sharing feelings, smell, and actions

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WDC members..

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