The visual of your poem is interesting and something I have not read before. I'm glad the pictures allow explanation because a few were difficult for me to figure out, so I hovered and this worked well. The uniqueness of your poetic creativity however can interrupt the smooth flow of your poem for some readers. I had to concentrate so that the minor interruption didn't take away anything. I liked reading the details of the feelings, situations, and thoughts for the future because it was a full story of love.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WDC members.


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