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Still Here Open in new Window. [E]
Cardinals are a sign that loved ones who have passed are still here watching over us.
by Madelyn 'Frosty' Stone Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, Madelyn 'Frosty' Stone Author Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, I am reviewing "Still Here" Open in new Window. because it was ahead of my entry in "Twenty-three in Eleven " Open in new Window..

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Labradors loving the weather. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I Like: I like the interaction between the mother and daughter because it showed how people and animals can help with grief.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

}Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction between the mother and daughter.

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