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 The Train Open in new Window. [E]
A boy and a train
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Review of The Train  Open in new Window.
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is indeed a fantastic Flash Fiction. All possible characteristics are covered. Though the boy is a central character, his brother also plays an important role. We can not deny the importance of the train, too. That train determines the fate of the story. The pace of the story is appreciably fast. Overall, a brilliant performance. Keep writing.

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