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 | An Ode to Brave Souls  [E] The battlefield is a grim fiend. Let this be an ode to the deaths of the many.  |
| (4.5)| Hello Peremos Happy 23rd WDC Birthday! This is a review on behalf of "Angel Review Forum" [ASR] This is only my views. Please use or discard as you're comfortable with.   Wow. Excellent speech. You show how war affects the heart of men, and at the same time also show how we can gain our strength after war. Title and Description - Fantastic title that caught my attention. The description made me want to read on! Theme/Subject Matter:- It's about war, and how war affects those fighting. To remember those who died fighting, and realize we can still stand strong and proud after the fight. Originality/Creativity:- The writing is done very well. I love the originality and creativity of showing a lot of sides of war. The sorrow of killing others, the sorrow of those who died, how you can still stand after the war, like a lone flower surviving on the battlefield, and perhaps sad, but true of the benefits a war can have afterward. Emotion/Impact: - Strong emotional impact that really made me think of those having to fight, and of war in general. My Suggestions - You did a great job. I only have a few small suggestions: your struggleand your struggle not without purposeis not without purpose  the battles you fightand the battles you fight  they shape the future.Summary: A fabulous piece of prose! It's very impactful and leaves the reader thinking about it for a while after they have read it. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!  KEEP ON WRITING ON!  Intuey   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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