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 Preacher Man Oh Preacher Man  Open in new Window. [E]
Just thinking out loud about the preacher man
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Happy to write Author Icon Happy WDC 23rd Birthday! This is a review on behalf of "Angel Review Forum" Open in new Window. [ASR] This is only my views. Please use or discard as you're comfortable with. *Smile*


*Reading* An inspiring read about meeting and conversing with a traveling preacher man.

*Balloon2* Title and Description - Your title made me curious about your writing. Your description urged me to read on!
I would put a comma after the first 'man'. I would also capitalize the first letter od each word in the title.

*Penr* Theme/Subject Matter:- It's about a person meeting up with a traveling preacher. The preacher graciously answers the person's questions. A quite inspirational piece.

I would consider changing the Category Educational to Inspirational. As it is an inspirational writing. *Smile*

*Flower1* Characters -Two great characters that we get to know through their conversation in this nicely written prose.

*Penb*Originality/Creativity:- I love the originality and creativity of getting the message across per a conversation. It kind of reminded me of John Cahn. If you haven't read him, check him out. I think you'll like his books.

*Flower3*Emotion/Impact: - It really left an inspiring impression on me.

*Balloon4* My Suggestions -

*Reading* King however I have laid

King, however, I have laid

*Bookstack2* song of the redemption

*Penb* that you live abundantly

for you to live abundantly

*Peng*Summary: I truly enjoyed your prose. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

*Quill* KEEP ON WRITING ON! *Quill*

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