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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings and happy account anniversary!

An amusing little piece of flash fiction about a woman’s misuse of an experimental medication and the absurd consequences.

Your simple, straightforward narrative style was easy to read, unburdened by dialogue. I would suggest adding a word count in the subtitle so people know it’s a quick read, or perhaps you can gather your flash fiction into a separate folder.

You can also choose two more relevant genres for this item; “Medical” and “Comedy” would probably work. It might also be interesting to know what prompt you were working off of; I assume the words in bold at the end were the required words from Arakun’s Daily FF Challenge.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Smile*


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