Greetings and happy account anniversary!

This was a wild, gritty and exciting read. I was relieved at the end when the two main characters survive. I don’t usually read action fantasy, but this was well done.

I’ve never heard of the loup-garu before, so that was interesting. Not your ordinary werewolf, eh? Your descriptions are great, showing us the ferocious creatures contrasted with the normal reality of the Golden Arches at night, set in the depths of winter. I enjoyed the way the two FBC agents interacted in the urban fantasy setting; it adds a touch of humor to the horror. It was also a good idea to leave off with the hint of further danger from the surviving creature.

Perhaps a word count in the subtitle would be helpful so people know what they’re getting into. Also, one of your categories could easily be “Action/Adventure”.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing


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