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The Darkest Storm Open in new Window. [ASR]
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Greetings and happy account anniversary!

A grim and chilling tale of a ragtag family of vampires who meet their demise. Your writing flows well, bringing us clear descriptions and imagery that sets the scenes nicely.

I don’t have anything in particular to suggest; perhaps you might want to make a note of which contest you entered it into. I like the Verdana font, but I usually suggest using size 4 to ensure readability across devices.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Smile* *HeartBl*


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