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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating ! I enjoyed your blog post and remembered that you had given me a recent review so I thought I'd return the favor for once. Thank you for all the many reviews you give me! I hope you enjoy this review and find the review uplifting. INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW: Good on you for recognizing your realizations! Well done! You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done! MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK: I haven't looked up the dictonary definition, but I think of epiphanies as huge, life-changing realizations. I wondered how these realizations changed your life? Are you saving time not reading thins you otherwise would have? Or have you already been doing that and just realized the pattern? As someone who doesn't watch the news or read about celebrities, I could easily relate to your feelings expressed about both of your realizations in this blog post. I like that you "tend to write poem's about celebrities whose work was especially soul stirring, whose work made me laugh or cry." I think that's lovely. I don't think I ever cared about celebrity gossip but I had an unusual upbringing. I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your blog post. Well done! Your blog post was interesting to me, felt like it was coming straight from your heart and brain. I like how authentic your writing is. Well done! IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER: I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's fine as it is. Well done! CONCLUSION: You have a great writing style and pure heart and I enjoy reading your blog posts and other writings. Well done! Thank you for sharing your time, heart, soul, community spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community! May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance! PWheeler My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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