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 Buddy Finds a Home Open in new Window. [E]
A stray longs to find a home. Will the lonely little guy find what he is searching for?
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is a very good story. It is very sweet. Like "The Call of the Wild" written by Jack London. The perspective is written from that of a Dog. In this case the dog was abandoned.

The story is written very well as we get a great insight into what the dog is thinking. He has a simpler mindset but there are enough feelings and thoughts to personify him. It makes him relatable and readers are rooting for him to be able to find a home. As a result, the sweet ending with the dog being able to find a family becomes all the more rewarding.

There is a slight correction that I would recommend. In the second sentence:
"Wondering" should be replaced with "Wandering"

Other than that...it was a really enjoyable story to read and I liked it a lot.*Dog1*

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