This is a very good story. It is very sweet. Like "The Call of the Wild" written by Jack London. The perspective is written from that of a Dog. In this case the dog was abandoned.
The story is written very well as we get a great insight into what the dog is thinking. He has a simpler mindset but there are enough feelings and thoughts to personify him. It makes him relatable and readers are rooting for him to be able to find a home. As a result, the sweet ending with the dog being able to find a family becomes all the more rewarding.
There is a slight correction that I would recommend. In the second sentence:
"Wondering" should be replaced with "Wandering"
Other than that...it was a really enjoyable story to read and I liked it a lot.
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