Greetings sindbad !

This is a 2nd Day Review as part of your "A Week of Port Raid Package" from "Magical Express Delivery Wagon"  gifted to you by your Secret Valentine. I hope you'll find this review as encouraging and inspiring.

Delving deep into the content, here are the things I found out:

Your poem doesn't shy away from acknowledging the darker aspects of human experience. Themes of loss, sadness, disappointment, and isolation are woven into the fabric of the poem, offering a sense of realism and shared understanding. This existential acceptance can be cathartic for readers grappling with similar emotions, allowing them to know they're not alone in their struggles.

Your excellent use of strong verbs and direct language creates a sense of emotional rawness. Phrases like "cry a little," "die a little," and "sometimes you got to lie a little" capture the messy, complex reality of human emotions without sugarcoating them. This honesty can resonate with readers who appreciate authenticity and transparency, especially in dealing with life's challenges.

By focusing on emotions rather than specific situations, your poem transcends individual circumstances and speaks to a wider human experience. Whether encountering betrayal, feeling isolated, or struggling with personal demons, readers can connect with the core message, fostering a sense of community and shared understanding.

Your poem's message, although not explicitly stated, resonates with a subtle encouragement to persevere. The line "So long you are not struggling" implies that struggles are a temporary state, and the act of struggling itself holds value. This can offer a glimmer of hope and motivate readers to keep going even when faced with difficulties.

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Ultimately, "LIFE IS LIKE THAT" serves as a poignant reminder of life's bittersweet nature and the universality of human emotions. While lacking in-depth exploration and actionable guidance, its raw honesty and existential acceptance can resonate with readers seeking validation and shared understanding. By acknowledging its positove aspects and limitations, we can appreciate its emotional impact while recognizing the potential for further development. The poem can serve as a starting point for deeper reflection and encourage individuals to explore their own unique ways of navigating life's complexities. Still, this is a beautiful piece worth reading. Thank you for sharing this piece to inspire us. Write on!

Best regards,
Gervic