This is a good poem. It seems very romantic and is appropriate to read this close to Valentine's day (at the time of my review). I think it gives a good reminder that a person close to you can inspire. It was sweet to read.
On a technical level. There are some great visual images shared. An Angel looking down from the sky paints a beautiful spiritual picture. I love the the use of the refrain "I blinked". Each stanza starting with it feels like we are browsing through a photo album getting a view of key memories in the narrators life... the wedding day, a both of a child, celebrating memories. It is beautifully written!
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