Greetings sindbad !

This is your seventh (last) day port raid as part of you "A Week of Port Raid Package" from "Magical Express Delivery Wagon"  gifted to you by your Secret Valentine. May you'll find this review an inspiring and encouraging one.

Without much a do, here are the things I found out after reading your offering:

The multifaceted view of God (fear, love, worship) touches upon emotions felt across various religions and spiritual beliefs. This broadens the poem's reach, inviting people of diverse backgrounds to find something that resonates.

Contradictions exist within the poem. God is both merciful and merciless, a figure of judgment and the ultimate liberation. This tension isn't a flaw; it reflects the genuine struggle many people face to reconcile seemingly opposing aspects of faith. More than providing answers, your poem asks big questions. By raising themes of life, death, and the potential for something beyond, it sparks inward reflection and a search for personal meaning.

The idea of a "balance sheet" invites multiple interpretations. One could see it as a literal accounting of good and bad deeds. Yet, it could also be more symbolic, hinting at a balance between opposing forces that must be maintained – an intriguing concept present in numerous philosophical systems.

In essence, your poem's beauty lies in how it mirrors the intricacy of human thought about the divine. It honors doubt, welcomes questioning, and suggests that spiritual journeys are rarely straightforward.

Overall, this is another great piece worth reading. Thank you for sharing and Write on!

Best regards,
Gervic