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 A Tribute to the Internet Open in new Window. [E]
A Tribute to the internet
by Emerick - The Preacher Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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The subject of the poem is clear and focused. It is a thank you to the people on the Internet that make it a community. I like that the poem ignores the existence of trolls and other negative people. The poem flows well for me and read really smooth for me. I didn't find any elements that jarred me loose from enjoying the poem. A couple of places the rhymes weren't perfect but they read well together. All together this poem was a positive experience for me. To be honest though the subject reminds me of sites like WDC as opposed to the Internet as a whole. Places where there are supportive caring members with a sense of community. If I had written it I would have chosen one of those sites as the subject of the poem, but I applaud the poet for choosing to generalize to the whole Internet. It takes a positive view to write a poem like this.

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