Hello Mumsy !

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I forget how I originally came upon this fantasy poem of yours, but I liked it and popped it into my February to-review list so I read it again today and hope you enjoy this review.



INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I thought your poem was fun and creative! Well done!

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done!



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

I loved that you set it to the tune / rhythm of "The Night Before Christmas." It made it even more fun for me to read. Well done!


My favorite two lines were these: "The candy was now in a place hard to find,
In hopes that out of sight might be out of mind." They made me chuckle. And salute you. Most people would just give NaNoWriMo as a perfectly "valid" reason to pig out on junky food and candy. Well done!

Kudos on even attempting NaNo! It's a fantastic challenge. Well done!

Your NaNoWriMo book sounded interesting to me. Did you finish it? Is it published here or somewhere else if you did?

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your fantasy poem. Well done!

Your NaNo poem was interesting to me, felt fun to read, and made me want to read your next one. Well done!



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's great as it is. Well done!



CONCLUSION:
You have a nice writing style and sense of humor and I enjoyed reading your NaNo fantasy poem. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time, fun spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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