Valerie is learning more about Drew while she visited him at Wezell house. First, she taught him to take a shower. Next was eating time. As she washed the dishes, she caught his attention by flipping the light switch on. Then she stopped to show him a lamp that had three settings. Then he explained about his world, how it is in his world. He is the lowest, Valerie is the brightest. Then it ends with him walking her to her home and they enjoy a goodnight kiss. This sounds like things are getting interesting. He wants her to be queen of his world and she doesn't want it. For now, she doesn't have to worry about it. Good tension built up.

Good details with the shower, food, lamp, and walk home. Just the right amount given. Him from another world sounds authentic. I wonder what kind of questions she'll ask tomorrow. Would just have to wait and see. No spelling or grammar errors found. There is some scenarios I can anticipate which she would have to enter the world. Getting chased down by bullies for example. Good job and keep up the good work!

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