Guide Me, Lord [E] A day Jesus sent his angels to keep me safe. |
Hello 👼intuey Congratulations on your Writing.com account anniversary this month! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion, courtesy of the "Anniversary Reviews" activity. Positives Wow, what a great story! This is one of the first times I've heard a true story about Jesus taking the wheel! I thought this was a great take on the prompt, and a really insightful perspective on the event. You did a really good job of explaining the thoughts and emotions going through your head both before and after the incident on the road, and how it really did feel like there was a supernatural element to it, based on the recognition that you could not have done it alone. Suggestions I was a little confused by the part where you mentioned that you thought the older couple which caused the crisis "knew exactly what they were doing" and that "they had planned it". Do you mean to imply that they were attempting to surprise you and get you to crash into them? I think that part of the story needs just a bit more context so the reader can understand what you mean and why you believe that. Overall This was a really great take on the prompt and an enjoyable story. Nice work! I hope you've found this review helpful. If so, please consider paying it forward by reviewing the work of another WDC author! Respectfully, Jeff "Rating & Reviewing Philosophy" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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