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Hello Steven Gepp!

Thanks again for the beta reader opportunity on this urban dragon novel of yours. I just finished reading these two chapters, so I'm here to do your review. I hope you enjoy it and find it encouraging and uplifting.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
*Bulletg* I enjoyed these three short chapters and am looking forward to the next installment. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulletg* You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done! *Clap*



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

*Bulleto* Everything seems to flow well and make sense so far. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulleto* I'm eager to have a dragon make an appearance. I wonder if the mysterious woman is a dragon shifter?

*Bulleto* I didn't notice any spelling mistakes in your three chapters. Well done! *Clap*


*Bulleto* Your story chapters were interesting to me, and made me want to read your next one. Well done! *Clap*



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's nicely done as it is. Well done! *Clap*


CONCLUSION:
*Bulletv* You have a great writing style and I easily got drawn into the story. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulletv* Thank you for sharing your time and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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