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 The Derg-Preparations Open in new Window. [E]
A flashback from the commissioner's POV
by Massive Friendly Derg Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Some days, one has to look to the past, to see how one gets to where they are now. A police commissioner thinks about how his city gained a hero, in the form of a dragon, who works to keep the city safe from harm. Criminals now have more than cops to watch out for, and must keep an eye on the sky these days.

Characters
Getting to know more about these people. Hope to see more.

I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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