On the ride to school Valerie noticed Drew improved overnight. She got him to laugh with her jokes. They made it during first period. When the bell rang Valerie thought to hurry to make it on time to second class. The teacher had a pop-quiz waiting. After that class she went to her locker to find Drew there. He wanted help with his lock and they were late. Only Drew convinced a hall monitor of it being an excuse. After more classes came lunch and Drew talked about PE. Then he got into a fight and they both went to principal's office. There they were alone until Mr. Thamos came in. He assured them that the principal was coming.

I wonder what would happen next. Good details. It would be interesting to see what the principal will decide. Next chapter. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!

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