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         Review for entry/chapter: "Ragged HeatOpen in new Window.
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Rated: GC | (4.5)
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Well, this looks like the start of an interesting story. Now, I will say that it's not for the faint of heart, because it's a bout a young woman that's trying to escape from what is clearly an abusive household. It also looks like this takes place in some sort of urban fantasy environment, if the descriptions are anything to go by. Makes one wonder.

Characters
The characters look interesting. I hope to learn more about them.

Spelling and Grammar
There are a number of sentences that do not start with capital letters. Of course, if that's part of the design, then, no real issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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