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 On Success and the Successful Open in new Window. [ASR]
A cynical poem on the many varieties of people who try to achieve something in life.
by Paledine Author Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Well, this is an interesting piece. You have a poem about luck and success, how they can go hand-in-hand. You have a Gambler, you can try his luck, but sooner or later, it will turn against him. Then there's the CEO - they get a lot of success but mistreating those under them, could lead to their very downfall at some point in the future.

Thoughts
Looks like a very interesting little piece, and makes one do more than a bit of thinking about their actions and such.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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