First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the description forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because they remind me of the green apple I had for my morning snack.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because I enjoyed reading the description of the apples.
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