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Review #4740399
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Castle's Chessboard  [E]
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by KingsSideCastle
         Review for entry/chapter: "Green Apples
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, KingsSideCastle , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Castle's Chessboard "Green Apples, because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024 forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the description forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because they remind me of the green apple I had for my morning snack.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because I enjoyed reading the description of the apples.

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