Hi Mindertwenty. I did enjoy your energetic poem. It made me think that anything is possible, and I liked that you kept an uplifting theme throughout from beginning to the end.

I thought the first two lines were a good hook because it made me think about how we often put things off until tomorrow with thoughts that we have plenty of time, but soon we realize that 'tomorrow' is now yesterday. There is so much wisdom there.

You went on to speak about time in amounts. Again, I felt that this is great! We often feel that time flies. I thought you expressed this in a creative way.

My absolute favorite part of your poem was when you were talking about reaching for the stars. I love how you mentioned an almost confusion about how you should have had one by now. I might have to use that in conversation sometime!

The most uplifting part of your poem, I thought, was the ending lines. Here, your poem took a change to positivity about what comes next. I thought your idea about taking initiative to take your life by the reins showed great imaginatation. The future is, indeed, yours for the taking!



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