This short story has a strong narrative arc and effectively portrays the characters' emotions and motivations. The theme of maintaining a simple, fulfilling life versus pursuing corporate success is relatable and well-developed. The use of driftwood as a symbol of simplicity and authenticity contrasts effectively with the mass-produced items that ultimately overshadow it. You've written a poignant and thought-provoking story that explores the tension between simplicity and commercialization.

You effectively convey the themes of family, identity, and the impact of commercialization on art and tradition. You can feel the emotion after Dad moves from his workshop to designing for a major corporation. I think that's how a lot of people feel about these multinational conglomerations: they're cold and devoid of life. And that's what Doris experiences. The promise of a better life and better future stole from her the great life and future she was already enjoying. And that's the tragedy and lesson of this story.

The characters are well-developed and relatable, particularly Curt's struggle between maintaining his artistic integrity and providing stability for his family. I can understand his ambition to do more and provide more for his family. It's a tough position to be in and fathers sometimes go unnoticed, unacknowledged, and unrewarded for the sacrifices they make.

The use of driftwood as a central motif ties the narrative together and adds depth to the story's themes. I think the ending furthers enhances this by Doris' standup routine making fun of commercialized and industrialized things. But none of them are driftwood. None of them are handmade. None of them are personal. It's also bittersweet that her stand up routine makes fun about something that was responsible for changing her life for the worse. Sometimes all we can do is laugh at our pain, right?

Your ending line is absolutely heart-wrenching but so good in its delivery. It's a perfect ending that frames the emotional journey of this short story.

The transition from Curt's initial success with his driftwood creations to the offer from Bed, Bath, and Beyond feels somewhat abrupt. Adding a scene or dialogue that shows Curt's hesitation or conflict about accepting the offer could enhance this transition and add depth to his character. He comes across as a man of conviction and integrity and I'm sure he would want some creative control over his designs and wouldn't be afraid to push back against a deal that was contrary to his ideals and morals.

More detail about Doris's experiences in the city and her decision to pursue stand-up comedy would enrich her character development and provide insight into her motivations. It may even be beneficial to start the story off with Doris performing on stage and then cut to this story as backstory and then end with her performance where she talks about nothing being made of her daddy's driftwood. And no one walks barefoot in the sand anymore.

The ending feels somewhat rushed which is why I suggested using Doris' standup as a way to "bookend" the story.

The only other bit that I'd suggest expanding would be to touch on more of the consequences of Curt's decision to accept the offer and the impact it has on his family's life.