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Hi Ken

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Blind Justice

First Impression: Those were some interesting additions to the story, kudos on making them work. Blind Justice fits perfectly here especially with ghost hunters.

What needs your attention: I can't find a dang thing worth mentioning. No grammar or punctuations errors but then you knew that.

What part I liked best: I love the elderly lady;s comment about she quit listening because she knew she was guilty. And then Tom pointed out the defendant was a man. Her response was perfect. I laughed at that. I chuckled quite a few times while reading it which made my husband look up at me. I think h's questioning my sanity again.

I wonder if jurors do discuss when dinner is. I'm 67 and I've never been called for jury duty. Maybe I shouldn't say that too loudly. I would drive the judge crazy with my overactive bladder.

Overall impression: This was an amusing short story that made light of the judicial system. The pacing was good. The required words were used with good placement that increased the humor.

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What does the Fox say????? Yup, it's me again.


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