Greetings !

I am currently reviewing as part of the tasks set by the "Game of Thrones" . I am reviewing together with Chrys O'Shea for Door #4. We found your piece in the Browse By Genre section of this site.

In this review, I mainly focus on the positives of your piece and I may point some Areas for Improvement if found any. Without much a do, here are the things I noticed after delving deeper into the contents:


Your poem "Courage" offers a refreshingly nuanced understanding of what constitutes bravery. It moves away from stereotypical images of battlefield valor, instead focusing on the internal battles we fight daily. The poem's opening stanzas emphasize acts of love, generosity, and facing uncertainty. These are often acts tinged with vulnerability, making them feel all the more courageous. The speaker then skillfully connects courage to a willingness to advocate for justice and stand in solidarity with those less fortunate – a type of courage with visible social ramifications.

What makes this poem stand out is its shift in focus. It champions the seemingly mundane tasks of self-care and responsibility as acts of bravery in themselves. We live in a world that bombards us with distractions, and choosing to focus on the chores no one applauds – doing the dishes, making your bed – requires fortitude. The poem then underscores the profound courage involved in familial duty. Prioritizing the well-being of loved ones over individual desires requires a deep well of selflessness, especially when coupled with the knowledge that the rewards of this investment might not be readily apparent.

The poem "Courage" resonates because of its simplicity and accessibility. There is a lyrical flow to the words that makes it easy to read and digest, ensuring its message sticks with its readers. The poem serves as a powerful proof that we are surrounded by opportunities to act with courage, no matter how ordinary our actions may seem. It's a proof to the quiet strength residing within us all. Thank you for a wonderful and inspiring read. Write on!


Best regards,
Gervic