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ATTENDANCE SHEET Open in new Window. [E]
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by .Jeremy. Author Icon
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Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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GAMES OF THRONES MESSAGE BOARD/ATTENDENCE REVIEW

This is a review for "ATTENDANCE SHEETOpen in new Window. from House Targaryen for "Game of ThronesOpen in new Window.

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THE MESSAGE BOARD

*Reading* The Message Board serves as a Guestbook for the author.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

What I loved about the guestbook is how the author has chosen a "Back to School" theme and is calling it "Attendance." Other items in the author's port are also school themed, so this is a nice compliment to the over all portfolio.

*Star* ENGAGING

The person popping in is invited to sign the attendance log. After all, one wants credit for being in the right place at the right time. The tone of the forum is light-hearted and endearing, encouraging the visitor to leave a missive.

*Star*VARIETY

A lot of people have stopped by and left a note, which was nice to see, if anything, it was a while since the last person prior to me had popped in - 27 days, I think. In that regard, I might suggest follow up to encourage engagement. Follow up could be anything. A question a day to bring people back or a prompt like flash fiction. It could be a school based prompt to stay on theme.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

I liked the graphic in the introduction. It set the tone of what to expect from the forum. It's always a good thing to take attendance. *ThumbsUpL*

Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen

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