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Hi Gaby

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Long-forgotten Lyrics Of My Life

First Impression: The title made me pause for a second. Long was capitalized but forgotten was hyphenated and lower case. It made me think the author didn't want to say she's fogotten anything. Yeah, I know my ocd is showing. I wanted to see the author own it. We all forget things or we don't want to experience those memories again.

What needs your attention: Nothing. Dang it girl. YOu make it hard to critique you. I'm foraging ahead for the 10,000 points.

What part I liked best: We share quite a few favorites. Ghost Hounds are from Pittsburgh, PA. I love that song too. My daughter is a Miley fan so I hear the song more than I want. It's not a bad song just not one I want blaring away over and over. Girl Crush is still one of my favorites, I've played it a lot over the years.

Overall impression: Interesting selection of songs. I enjoyed reading on what attracts you to them. Some of the songs we enjoy for the similar reasons and other songs our differences show. For instance, I enjoy romantic songs but I don't like writing them. I let other authors disappoint the reader. I want the magic to live in my head. I can't say I'm romantic but I do love roses. I prefer to grow them versus having them bought for me. Rainbows belong in the sky.

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